In continuing my review of ‘Untitled,’ the editor in me is always at the fore front, and I’m at the ready to start editing. But, as I coach my clients, “Get the draft done then edit.” So I’m practicing what I teach and pressing on.
However, my scenes flow smoothly through sensory language that creates a narrative/dramatic arc, though there are areas that I can see requires enhancing with the use of more active verbs to give weight to the writing. I can also see that I need to jazz up the pace to create rhythm and pace in other parts, as well as edit extraneous words, which comes from brain dumping.
Took a break from my research and commenced a scene introducing Lavina’s mother, Louise. I’m looking forward to seeing how this will pan out.
I’m hyped up as I get to the finish line of My NaNoWriMo Journey.